![]() ![]() I feel that that is something if the choice is made it should affect the story. It just dosent mace sense an controdicts the story at the end of chapter 1 with hannah getting eaten. "Alright so as it stands i just feel the end of the chapter should be conditional if you had an option to not have hannah join you it could work then the ending still needs to be rewritten."ĭotsu wrote:My ocd is bugging me here then someone else would have to get eaten by the evil coorperation woman. An her wanting pri to save her makes it seem they are still friends. The end of the chapter an how Hannah reacted to being eaten made it sem she had no idea it was possible. The end of the chapter would still have to be rewretten regardless. Though honestly I find the whole thing a bit out of character for Hannah's mother, who generally seems oblivious to. It could make sense if rather than working for EC, Hannah's mother finds out what you did to her daughter (and the neighbors, and statistically half the town) and "somehow" gets her hands on some of the mcguffinade to put an end to your rampage. so i thought i should put this out there. Dotsu wrote:Your game oppi but id feel it would make to many plot holes an it seems like your wanting to adhere to the story by at least a little bit. ![]()
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